[Ulf Lamping <ulf.lamping@xxxxxx>]

Graeme Hewson wrote:

> Ulf Lamping wrote:
>
> > > Descriptions under figure 3.2: run-on sentences. ", see" should be
> > > ". See".
> >
> > Sorry, didn't found the place to change
>
> I mean each item under figure 3.2. E.g., File: "... in whole or in 
> part, and to quit from Ethereal. See Section 3.5, ..."

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> > > 3.15: "such as" would be preferable to "like" in "(like the Ethernet
> > > addresses)" and "(like the IP addresses)". 
> >
> > don't get the point
>
> "Like" sounds too informal to me, and not right.  It's also ambiguous: 
> it can mean "such as" or "for example", but it can also mean "in the 
> same manner as" (which is nonsensical, of course -- ethernet addresses 
> don't write data).

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Regards, ULFL