[Graeme Hewson <ghewson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Ulf Lamping wrote:

> > 1.7.1 remove comma in "keep in mind, that a lot of people"
>
>
> are you sure?

Reasonably.  I'd say "keep in mind that a lot of people" or "keep in 
mind, a lot of people".  I think 
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_comma.html part 4 
applies.  (I found that through a Web search, BTW; I haven't studied the 
site.)

> > 1.7.2 ethereal-users: run-on sentence. change "Ethereal, others" to
> > "Ethereal; others"
>
>
> are you sure?

Maybe I was too picky.

> > 1.7.4 "cut -f' ' -d2" should be "cut -d' ' -f2". Is there any particular
> > reason to use "whereis", though? Simpler would be "which", as in:
> >
> > gdb `which ethereal` core >& bt.txt
> This is from one of the former authors. I would think the whole unix 
> related section(s) has to be redesigned/updated.
>
> > Add note that the backtrace command won't be echoed.
>
>
> added it to the backtrace note, please review

I suggest insert "but": "after the first line shown above, but it will 
not be echoed".  Also, there's still the swapped -d and -f in the second 
stage of the pipe.