[Ulf Lamping <ulf.lamping@xxxxxx>]

Graeme Hewson wrote:

> 4.1 "to start capure packets" should be "to start capturing packets"

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> 4.2 tip: "just try to keep" should probably be "just try keeping"

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> 4.2.1:
>
> Interface: drop "the" in "the Ethereal"

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> Link-layer header type: substitute "Unless you are in the rare situation
> that you need this,"

Sorry, don't understand

> Buffer size: "try to increase" should probably be "try increasing"

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> Capture packets in promiscuous mode: I think "put the interface in" is
> better (as you say the first note)

Sorry, don't understand

> 4.2.2:
>
> Next file every n megabyte(s), Next file every n minute(s): remove comma
> after "Switch to the next file,"

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> Stop capture after n file(s): change "Stop capturing after switched" to
> "Stop capturing after switching"

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> 4.2.3: remove commas after "Stop capturing,"

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> 4.2.4 Automatic scrolling: complete sentence preferable, as in "This
> option is greyed out if "Update list of packets in real time" is
> disabled."

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> 4.3 first tip: should be "one of the "Multiple files" options."

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> 4.3 note: "these information" should be "this information"

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> 4.4: better to drop "will" in "The following paragraphs will describe"

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> 4.4: typo: choide

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> 4.5: preceeded should be preceded and preceed should be precede

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> 4.5 ether: missing space in "includethe"

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> Description of figure 4.2: "The protocols which are counted cannot be
> changed."

That's misleading! The protocols *can* be changed (by preferences), only 
the selection which is displayed in this dialog cannot!

> 4.6.1: mention ^E ?
I've added a section, please review.


As the next Ethereal release 0.10.6 seems to be planned, I would like to 
release this book (as it's related to 0.10.5) any time soon.

Is it possible for you to hurry up the review a bit? So we might release 
this book before the weekend? (Yes I know, time is precious, I'm busy 
myself).

Regards, ULFL